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As I fall, and you turn away.
You walk down corridors miles away from heart.
As I breathe, as I surrender...
I hear the sound of whispering.
Replace these veins, with these stomach aches and butterflies that long to tear away.
Screaming, I'll tear out, I'll tear out,
I'll tear out your heart.
With the lights out, I hope you never leave my side.
-Luke Pickett, Empty Corridors


I have absolutely no clue why I made this. I was just bored and looking for some nice stock to use for future photo manips. And I found this. :] I was also looking for some practice, cause my skills are no where near what I want them to be. I really wish I had a story for this picture, because it seems like there should be a story. Oh and I know the forelock smudging is HORRIBLE, but I was just trying to see what I could do with it, and I found out I could completely destroy it. haha :D I might be using this for a future character on [Cimoron Island], but I honestly have no clue....


Critique please! Be harsh!

horse : [link]
background : [link]
sky : [link]

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BC: First of all, I LOVE YOUR ART!

The GOOD:
I love how you come up with the strangest ideas and then just make a picture out of it. The picture is peaceful in a way. I also like how well you blended the horse to where he/she looks like they are actually there. The smudging on the mane is fantastic as well. Kudos.

THE BAD:
It's not as bad as it seems, but the moon and the clouds really bother me. The moon, you can tell was stretched and the top cloud is a little too bright for night. Also, the reflection of the moon and clouds are too perfectly matched. The water would delute the perfect circle and such and make some warking in it. The last thing that I would work on is the placement of the horse. The bright moon takes away from the character and for a moment, I couldn't even see your charrie. All I noticed was the moon.
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thanks hun!
i really love critique like this, specific :]
haha, yeah i'm working on practice stuff right now.

so if you want to give me any orders feel free. :hug:

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bee cee productions bby
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I love how creative you got with it :D
wonderful wonderful job!

and thanks for using my stock :)
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I think the forelock looks pretty...
I LOVE THIS!
Gorgeous as usual, love!

I texted you earlier and you never texted back.

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I love you as much as bunnies love to multiply!©
:jackdirt:

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